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#2393
William Woytowich
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Super Dave - fs board 1 Year, 7 Months ago Karma: 0
This kid bangs.

I don't like the shadow on the ledge, i would prefer it too be nice and clean, with no shadows. And i don't like how its a little bit out of focus. Also i would have liked to clean all the ciggarette butts on the ground, but didn't have a broom, and a little more steez would have been nice.
Other than those few things, i like the shot.
Tell me what you think

Peace!
 
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William Woytowich
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Re:Super Dave - fs board 1 Year, 7 Months ago Karma: 0
And from the same night. Different angle
 
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Rupert Voremberg
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Re:Super Dave - fs board 1 Year, 7 Months ago Karma: 0
The first shot is a little too centred for my liking and I'm not so sure about filmer in shot type situations - maybe if he was wearing black/hood up it might add a little interest without being distracting?
As for the cigarette buts, they don't bother me at all, since when was skateboarding meant to be clean?
 
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Re:Super Dave - fs board 1 Year, 7 Months ago Karma: 0
since when was skateboarding meant to be clean?

Its not the skateboarding im worried about being clean. Its the photo you know? But thanks for the crit too! and i don't like the filmer being there either. That's why i changed it up, and shot a different angle...as seen there!
 
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Colin Wiseman
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Re:Super Dave - fs board 1 Year, 7 Months ago Karma: 0
wouldn't call it a different angle...maybe different composition? The half shadow bugs me a bit too. you try shooting up close/fish and get him up in the sky? Could wedge yourself between the wall and steps, that'd lose the filmer too.
 
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