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#2349

Jay Delaney

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front smith 1 Year, 8 Months ago

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I really like this shot for a few reasons. One of wich is the lighting and second of wich is the timing.
I'm just kinda bummed about the duration of the lighting on the pants. I didn't want them to fade into blackness but because of the power i had on the flash, the duration suffered. So there's a bit of motion blur on the pants but some have told me that that little bit of blur lends to the action so I don't know. Am I being to nit picky?

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#2350

Evan Nash

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Re:front smith 1 Year, 8 Months ago	Karma: 0
i think you nailed it homie. i like the composition. it really fills the frame. i think you have done well with the light. That one little hot spot isnt much of a problem for me. if anything it serves to seperate ass from blackness

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#2351

Travis Tuckerman

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Re:front smith 1 Year, 8 Months ago	Karma: 0
that shot is dope!! you killed it man lighting and comp..nice.......did he land it??

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#2352

Owen Woytowich

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Re:front smith 1 Year, 8 Months ago	Karma: 8
He looks like he's falling off of trick to me. Is he standing up tall on any others? I think a vertical fish could be sick too, making that rail look longer. Pretty photo though.

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#2353

Jay Delaney

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Re:front smith 1 Year, 8 Months ago	Karma: 0
Thanks for the props and crits! Yah he did land this and I hear yah Owen on the look its just that the bar is a bit lower than the run up and he kinda had to power through the drop to grind. I'll look through and see if there's other's of him standing taller.