Action Sports Cartel

Finally time to post something!
this is from an urban ride in Minneapolis. One stobe on camera and one off to the left somewhere.

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I think the lighting and timing work fairly well, and B&W looked better than the colors it'd had.

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maybe too strong of post processing, too tight of comp? - my widest glass is 28. the shadow behind him from the on-camera flash is a little too strong (I keep one on camera b/c I have to set up in a couple seconds at each spot as we cruise around)

really? nobody's got some shit to throw at my photo?

bump...

it doesn't help that it's hard to tell what's going on. He could be doing a hop over something or off something, just pretty vague. Action seems weak, he's making a stupid face, wearing a backpack etc.
lighting is really flat, b/w processing isn't up to much.

some things just aren't really worth shooting in my opinion...