Action Sports Cartel

smallish setup rail but i like his style. thought it looked cleaner in bw too. filmer is in there but i couldn't do much about it.i like the comp with him in corner nicely.let me know what yah think with some crit please.

What about shooting from the other side? there is many distracting stuff right now..

yeah i felt like it it was a losing battle, there was an ugly library and a pretty close tree on the other side so i thought this was a little better

with filmers get your lighting and angle dialed then see if you can get him to stay out of the frame for one hit. Make sure you nail it then.
Most filmers i've come across will respect getting one snap at it on an urban feature if the riders keep nailing it.

as for the shot it needs a lot of cleaning up. all the wires, poles, trees... without being there i can't really help you out on how, but i'm sure if you worked through different lenses locations, heights, framing you'll be able to make something work

I agree with Reuben for the filmer thing,

As for lens work, I think fisheye is the only way to get something decent out of that rail.
Couple steps to your right/up and a little lower would make the rail look bigger and would put some emphasis on the donkey.